LC: Assess the effectiveness of own and others’ writing in relation to audience and purpose.
You are going to read and respond to someone else's writing. Remember to be positive and encouraging as well as pointing out what you think would have made it more effective. Comment on basic skills and Year 5 writing non-negotiables too if you think it would help.
Here are some ideas to help you respond.
I think the way you . . . is really effective because .
The vocabulary you have used is . . .
You remembered to . . .
I think your writing could be improved by . . .
Your ideas are clearly stated and easy to understand, for example . . . really helps the reader imagine . . .