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Warm up

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Warm up

For our warm up today, we are focusing on writing sentences with a relative clause and action and dialogue. As you can see below, there is an example of a relative clause and action and dialogue. Look carefully at the punctuation in the examples to help you understand it's location in each sentence.

 

First, add a relative clause to the sentence below.

 

Next, as you can see, the dialogue is there for you. Add action to the dialogue you can see below.

Today’s Lesson

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Today we are going to be writing the next paragraph to our own innovated versions of the croquet match. In your paragraph today, I would like to see at least one relative clause and one piece of action and dialogue.

Step 1

Have your innovated plans at the ready again, just like yesterday. Read through this to remind yourself of the characters that you chose to replace Alice and the Queen of Hearts.

 

For example: I changed mine to Henry and the King of Clubs.

 

You WILL need this plan to help you understand the plot when writing your own versions of the croquet match.

Step 2

 

The MODEL is here to guide you. You can magpie some information from it but do try and change as much as you can when writing your own paragraph

 

Let the MODEL guide you when using different sentence openers in your writing.

TASK

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TASK

First write the date and LC.

 

Write the next paragraph to your own innovated versions of the croquet match.

 

Remember the story you are writing MUST include your own characters. Try to change as much as you can from the MODEL but use it to help you write different sentence structures.

 

YOU WILL NEED TO USE:

- Your innovated plans.

- The MODEL to guide you.

HOW YOUR WORK SHOULD BE PRESENTED IN YOUR BOOK!

 

Wednesday 27th January

LC: To write the next part of the story including a relative clause and action and dialogue.

 

Covered in lumps and bumps,...

 

 

 

 

 

 

Look at the slide below. This is to remind you what different sentence structures you could include in your paragraph.

When you have finished your paragraph, send a picture of it to your teacher on SEESAW.

 

BEAUTIFUL PRESENTATION PLEASE!

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