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Literacy Two

Monday 21st September, 2020

LC: To use different sentence structures.

LC: To write the first section of a non-chronological report.

Today, you are going to write your non-chronological report on the Roman Empire using your plan created last week. 

 

Miss Hall and Mrs Harper will be modelling a non-chronological report on the Roman Army in order to help you.

 

You can also use our key report text: Roman Towns to help you too. 

In lesson two, we are going to write the first section of your report.

 

Remember that report information can be presented in any order so it is up to you which of the topics you report on first. 

 

You will have to leave enough space in your book for your diagram or text box if you have chosen to link one of these features to this section. 

Now it's time to begin. 

 

You will need to look at your new text first section in your boxed-up plan. 

 

 

Original text

New text

Magpie Ideas

First Section

Water systems

- high standard of hygiene

-built aqueducts for clean, regular water

How they fought in battle

- well-trained, organised – century (100 men) led by centurion

-advanced in tortoise shape, shields protected from attack

- fired heavy boulders or burning sticks from catapult

- took pride in skills, loss was unthinkable

Subheading

Technical words

Determiners- a, most

Click on the WAGOLL button below to help you write a good first section using the features we have learned.
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