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LC to edit writing looking for opportunities for improvement.

Yesterday we wrote our invented stories. Mrs Metcalfe continued her story. It is not quite finished.
If you didn’t finish your story keep going until you get to the end!

The Gigantic Whale by Mrs Metcalfe

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Before Mrs Metcalfe continues her story she will look through and improve it. Can you see where she has found two places where it can be improved?
This is called editing.

Finish your story and edit it. Then send a photograph of it to your teacher in an email or save it on Seesaw or on Purple Mash.