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Answer the questions in your Reading Journal. 

Thursday 21st May

The River Nile Comprehension

the river nile 1 3 no answers.pdf

 

Thursday 21st May

LC: To note and develop ideas.

How to write a formal letter

Feelings and Emotions

  • shocked
  • furious
  • disappointed
  • upset
  • distressed
  • horrified
  • frustrated
  • concerned
  • annoyed
  • terrified

Formal Complaint Phrases

  • I am writing to complain about...
  • I was extremely disappointed by...
  • I expect an explanation for...
  • I strongly believe that...
  • I would like to express my concerns about...
  • I was unhappy with...
  • This situation was unacceptable because...
  • I feel that better precautions should have been taken.

Describing the Incident

  • suddenly
  • without warning
  • chaos erupted
  • panic spread
  • visitors screamed
  • the crowd gasped
  • the lion pounced
  • people rushed away
  • keepers arrived too late
  • confusion filled the zoo

Powerful Verbs

  • pounced
  • roared
  • grabbed
  • swallowed
  • shouted
  • demanded
  • rushed
  • stared
  • trembled
  • complained

Adjectives

  • dangerous
  • terrifying
  • appalling
  • careless
  • irresponsible
  • shocking
  • dreadful
  • chaotic
  • unacceptable
  • frightening

 Requests and Expectations

  • I expect immediate action.
  • Safety measures should be improved.
  • I would appreciate a response.
  • Visitors deserve better protection.
  • This must never happen again.
  • I hope changes will be made quickly.
  • A refund would be appropriate.
  • I look forward to your reply.

Useful Conjunctions

  • furthermore
  • however
  • although
  • therefore
  • because
  • meanwhile
  • as a result
  • in addition

 

 

Thursday 21st May

On a cold and gloomy evening in London, young Oliver Twist wandered carefully through the crowded streets, searching for warmth and safety. Although he was tired and hungry, he remained hopeful that life would improve one day. Smoke curled from the chimneys above him while the sound of horses and carts echoed along the cobbled roads. Despite the hardships he faced, Oliver showed kindness, courage, and determination wherever he went.

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Thursday 21st May

Ancient Egypt: The River Nile | History | BBC Teach

Why was the Nile important in Ancient Egypt?

The Impact of the Nile River in Ancient Egypt

The Importance Of The River Nile in Ancient Egypt