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Thursday 

Complete Review 16

Compose and sequence their own sentences to write short non-fiction texts, e.g. recounts, information texts, instructions

Today we are going to write information about trains.
 

Talk partners 

Can you remember the sentences from yesterday?

Now your teacher will model and share with you how to write sentences about trains.

 

Once your teacher has wrote the shared write, you are to follow the model write.

 

Soon it will be your turn to write for CBeebies!

 

Things to remember:

 

spaces

full stops

capital letters

and

but

or

beautiful handwriting

For teacher:

Shared writing

Steam trains burn coal in a firebox to heat the water and make steam. It goes fast and puffs out steam because it burns coal. They pull lots of coaches and have powerful engines. Steam trains can be different colours but they all have chimneys. The train driver drives the train and can go fast or slow. People like steam trains because they are old and exciting!

Read aloud your writing audibly to adults and peers.

Today we are going to make our TV show about trains for CBBC!

We will be reading our writing from earlier today then present it on video.

Your talk partner will film you doing this, on your own iPad.

Next, practise reading your writing about trains using a really interesting TV voice.

Can you remember it off by heart?

Can we use research to identify how the materials from which toys are made has changed over time?

Over the last few weeks we have been looking at toys from the past!

Lets watch this video about how different toys have changed over time ; 

 

From what we have learned using research, draw a line from each toy to a date on the timeline on seesaw then write a sentence explaining your choices.

Can we use comparative testing to investigate which materials is the most reflective?